and darkness persists........
she resumes her regular stroll through hell..
where, what, why have no response right now..
shes trapped in a vicious circle
expecting no miracle
finds herself entangled in a web
strangulated
dead
something goes wrong and everything else follows
the world seems to be an inferno
and shes out of thoughts
weakened by inaction
passers by look on..
she hears their jibes
world seems to end
there is no reason
no rational thought
no godot
no expectation
no goal
shes trapped in a bog
what she sees is morose
evil spirits haunt her
nicotine rushes through her blood
and enhances her inaction
blocks her thoughts..
and d darkness persists..
and she wakes up after sometime
to discover it was the same nightmare..
4 comments:
impressive.... :-)
an explosive start...
waiting for more...
keep going
are tu to thriller likhne lagi.. :P Nice idea.. continue gud job..:)http://achintya85.blogspot.com for reference.. :)
The poem is awesome but very depressing. It also represents parts of your feelings at the moment that you wrote the poem , so I would say cheer up . This is life Ashima.. Life will throw up challenges , will leave many expectations unfulfilled. But on the other hand, it will give you things which you never expected. Life is unpredictable . Take care
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